What is personification?
Personification is a figure of speech in which a writer gives human qualities, actions or feelings to something that is not human. The thing might be an object, a force of nature, an animal, a place or an abstract idea.
In “The wind whispered through the trees,” wind cannot whisper, because whispering is something people do. The sentence borrows a human action to make the sound easier to picture.
Personification is a kind of figurative language, one of the techniques covered in our guide to identifying language features. It is not meant to be read literally. Readers understand that the wind is not a person, and they get a sharper image from the comparison.
Simple personification examples
The examples below are grouped by what is being personified. In each one, the human trait is the word that does the work.
Weather and nature
- The sun smiled down on the picnic. (smiled: a facial expression)
- The wind howled in anger. (howled in anger: a voice and an emotion)
- The flowers danced in the breeze. (danced: a human activity)
- The ocean waves whispered secrets to the shore.
- The stars winked at me from the night sky.
- Thunder grumbled across the valley.
- The old oak held out its arms to the tired birds.
Everyday objects
- The alarm clock yelled at me to get out of bed.
- The old chair complained when he sat down.
- The door refused to open.
- The computer froze in fear during the presentation.
- My shoes begged me not to run today.
- The car coughed and sputtered before it started.
- The fridge hummed a lazy tune all night.
Feelings and abstract ideas
Personification is especially useful for ideas that have no body, such as time, death, fear or hope.
- Time crept by.
- Fear gripped the whole town.
- Opportunity knocked, but he did not answer.
- Justice is blind. (a very familiar example, often linked with the image of Lady Justice)
- Hope held her hand through the long night.
- Sadness settled over the room like a visitor who would not leave.
Places, time and the body
- This city never sleeps.
- The streets were talking about the news.
- Night fell softly on the harbour.
- My stomach growled at the smell of dinner.
- My heart skipped when I saw her.
Personification in literature and poetry
Writers have used personification for centuries. A few well-known cases:
- Emily Dickinson, “Because I could not stop for Death”: Death is a courteous driver. The poem opens, “Because I could not stop for Death – / He kindly stopped for me.” Death is a gentleman caller here, which softens how the poem treats dying. Notice that the speaker is first person while Death appears in the third; see point of view poem examples.
- William Shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet: Romeo says, “Arise, fair sun, and kill the envious moon.” The sun is a figure to be called upon and the moon a jealous rival.
- John Keats, “To Autumn”: the season is addressed as a close friend of the sun, and later in the poem it is pictured sitting and reaping like a person.
- Homer: the epic poems repeatedly speak of “rosy-fingered Dawn,” giving the morning hands. This phrase is a classic example of a fixed description attached to a personified thing.
- E. B. White, Charlotte’s Web: Charlotte the spider plans and writes. Strictly, talking animals are usually called anthropomorphism (see below), but the book shows how the two ideas overlap.
When you read a poem, a good question to ask is what the personified thing is made to want or feel. That is often where the poem’s mood sits.
Personification in art and everyday symbols
Personification is not limited to words. Visual art and public symbols use it too. Death is often shown as a robed figure, Lady Justice stands for the law, and the Muses represent the arts in classical tradition. National symbols such as Britannia or Uncle Sam give a country a human face.
Advertising does the same with mascots and brand characters, and children’s books with talking trains, houses and the moon.
Why writers use personification
- To make images vivid. “The candle flame danced” is easier to picture than “the candle flame moved.”
- To explain abstract ideas. Turning time or fear into a character makes it concrete.
- To create mood. An “angry” storm and a “gentle” breeze set different tones.
- To help readers connect. Human feelings are familiar, so readers relate to the scene more easily.
- To add humor or charm. A stubborn door or a complaining chair makes ordinary scenes funny.
How to write personification
- Pick the thing you want to describe, such as the sea, a clock or loneliness.
- Decide on the feeling or mood you want. Is the sea threatening, patient or playful?
- Choose a human action or emotion that matches that mood: grumbled, tiptoed, sulked, welcomed.
- Use it as a verb where you can. Verbs usually carry personification best: “The sea swallowed the footprints.”
- Check that it fits. Avoid mixing images, and be careful not to overuse it. One strong example in a paragraph usually works better than five.
Practice by taking a plain sentence (“The rain fell on the roof”) and rewriting it three ways: gently (“The rain tapped on the roof”), angrily (“The rain hammered on the roof, demanding to be let in”), and sadly (“The rain wept on the roof”).
Personification vs. anthropomorphism, metaphor and pathetic fallacy
These terms overlap, and different sources draw the lines slightly differently, but the common distinctions are:
| Term | Basic idea | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Personification | Human traits given to a non-human thing, in a figure of speech | The wind whispered. |
| Anthropomorphism | Animals, gods or objects shown with human form or behavior, often throughout a story | A fable with talking foxes |
| Metaphor | One thing described as another | Life is a journey. |
| Pathetic fallacy | Nature’s mood reflects a character’s mood | Storm clouds gather as a character despairs |
Personification is often a kind of metaphor, because it describes one thing in terms of another. It is distinct in that the borrowed qualities are specifically human.
Where the word comes from
“Personification” is generally traced to the Latin persona, meaning a person or character (originally linked to a theatrical mask). The ending shows the idea of “making,” so the word means roughly “making something a person.”
Frequently asked questions
What is the purpose of personification?
It makes writing more vivid and relatable, helps explain abstract ideas, and sets a mood. Seeing a non-human thing act like a person helps readers picture and feel the scene.
Can you give personification examples in art?
Yes. Familiar cases include the figure of Death in many paintings, Lady Justice with her scales, and national figures like Britannia. In each, an idea or place is shown as a person.
Is personification the same as metaphor?
Not exactly. Many writers treat personification as a specific type of figurative language that often works like a metaphor, but only when the thing is given human traits.
What are simple personification examples for kids?
“The sun smiled,” “the flowers danced,” “the door refused to open” and “the moon kept watch” are easy places to start.